Review Detail of Joefish95 in Beast Taming: I Can Extract Pleasure Points

The story starts off very well and progresses with fluid high points, but as soon as chapter 41 starts grammatical errors constantly appear. The biggest problem is the he/she description where a grandma is a he or the main character referenced as male from the beginning starts being referred to as she. Before publishing any writen literature get someone to proof read. If I knew how bad the book would turn out never would have spent the time to read.