Aittle bit of info dump at the start but it does improve a whole lot later. Few grammatical mistakes here and there but the story is interesting. I'm very interested in the parent's relationship. It sounds quite cute. I wouldn't mind a few slice of life chapters of them just living their lives everyday. Good work Author!
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