Review Detail of Oto in Pornstar System

Massive amount of grammatical and punctuation mistakes, without even mentioning the glaringly obvious terrible mastery of capitalization. The only review I can give this novel: unreadable. When half of the novel is written in capitals, it really detracts from the story. The plot might be fine, but I would be surprised if you retained more that 20% of new readers by chapter 10. It’s simply that off-putting. The content of the story is simply not outweighing the chore of reading your story. Regardless whether people are looking for actual plot or simply lemon, its not worth a read. You just simply cannot get immersed in a novel with such unprofessionalism as this. Author, seeing your responses to other reviews, it seems you dont take negative reviews very well. I’d recommend you to heed some of the advice from your negative reviews. Your current chapters need massive amounts of editing, and simply ignoring it and continuing to write more chapters is fool’s play. Hope to revisit your novel another time and be surprised, as small a chance as that may be.