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okay, Author this the third time I added this fic again. and you still didn't fix some things. the details bruh, what kind of kido casting is this" the fourth of hado, pale lightning" you should do it normally like "hado number four, pale lightning" it rolls of the tongue nicely specially since in kido pronunciation is very important. and one wrong pronunciation can cause the spell to explode midway or to miss the target. and please just use a simple one word activation command for kyoka suigetsu jaust say shatter is enough.

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