Review Detail of berserkbarath008 in Head-Patting in Marvel

it's about a man transmigration into a boy in mcu with a system with trade facility. the starting goes good and author did a good job then it comes the clone him and split his personality I was like okay. then the clone arc which is really good. then it becomes a typical fanfiction. personally after getting quest I become to lose intrest. and also with the mc love is rushed. where in mc clone case I think that idea is really good worth for its own without system and other things. then it comes the magic which made he drop reading it. it is really hard to have a character which on the same plane as mcu character. if the author tones the mc system and props he get and become a superhuman but not op it would be intresting. The characters character not so attachable. my advice to author is put yourself into the situation and write more practical with exaggeration. just because you got a system and in mcu nothing becomes easy. overall it's okay for me