Review Detail of NullElement in Will of Chaos (Dimensional chat group)

I like his personality so far, there are some bits that you could improve on though like I saw someone comment on chap one when "Sora" was doing the merge with the mystic eyes that it would be better if you put it saying that he bit down on his lip drawing blood resisting to scream out in pain just to make it more real. Stuff like that just small details, But I really like it so far!