lazy writing with dumb plot, simple things are streched to give an impression of mystery when it's just annoying, full of plot holes,
Slewpy
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LIKEoriginally 5, after your reply,i read the 6th, i see that your character is also really dumb, i don't see the appeal it can cause if it is intentional but i'm sure that you will refute my claim anyway, i mean seriously, jumping on rooftops? sudden desire to save the damsel in distress in his escape from torture after accidently falling from a rooftop that surprisingly did not gather any attention around? İt has nothing to do with how much i read, it is forced lazy plot.
Slewpy:Up to which chapter did you read?
As someone who had everything, I highly doubt he'll emotionally mature in an instant after appearing in that place. His decisions would never be the best... Anyway, if you're going to write a review like this, read a sizeable amount so you can explain your point. It's not as if you have to pay for the chapters.
DaoistH7599X:originally 5, after your reply,i read the 6th, i see that your character is also really dumb, i don't see the appeal it can cause if it is intentional but i'm sure that you will refute my claim anyway, i mean seriously, jumping on rooftops? sudden desire to save the damsel in distress in his escape from torture after accidently falling from a rooftop that surprisingly did not gather any attention around? İt has nothing to do with how much i read, it is forced lazy plot.