Review Detail of Malik_druinace in Fate is not what it seems (BL)

for my first story on here there's thing here and there that I don't like but it isn't entirely bad and there's a lot of twist and turns and I didn't expect I had one-way things were going to go and ended up changing it and there was one chapter that was supposed to be there but for some reason it disappeared so if you're wondering if you missed a chapter that's the reason and there is the same theme with their lover hurting them and them forgiving them because they love them and it does kind of get annoying but they both love each other and that's how it is and they both become better also remember fate is not what it seems