Review Detail of funmaxwell in Martial World: A Saiyan Immortal
Review detail
I very much like the premise of this story. but I've seen this idea done before by other authors and let's just say that all the ones I've read so far were terrible. the authors that have tried this idea before usually messed it up by make the character use the cultivation world form of mystical energy and story's are usually very fast which creates a whole list of other issues. so far in your story I liked some of the jokes you made. I also feel it's too early to judge whether you're fic is good or not so I'm just going to leave it at 4 stars. I hope that's what story ends up being better than the ones I've seen so far with this exact same premise
Martial World: A Saiyan Immortal
Edock
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Interestingly, dbz ki, in a cultivation world that doesn't use ki but can feel its pressure, there is certainly a possibility.
Edock:Thx, I'll definitely take your concerns into account. Btw, what do you mean by using the cultivation world's energy specifically? Like, do you think I should just stick with dbz's ki or something?
yes I think you should just stick to DBZ ki. as to what i mean they usually in my experience try to have the character use QI I think it was called.
Edock:Thx, I'll definitely take your concerns into account. Btw, what do you mean by using the cultivation world's energy specifically? Like, do you think I should just stick with dbz's ki or something?
Edock:Thx, I'll definitely take your concerns into account. Btw, what do you mean by using the cultivation world's energy specifically? Like, do you think I should just stick with dbz's ki or something?