Review Detail of Mcintoshstar in In the end you weren’t worth it

My name is McIntoshstar and I don't consider myself a top tier author nor is my writing skills the best but I love the story. The character development is going great and the story is not pacing quickly. The only errors I have ran into is one or two sentences missing a comma, I hope the story continues to be great as it grows and I'll be here to see it's progress in the future.[img=recommend]