Review Detail of Holo_Lover in Dragon Ball - Mimi no Monogatari

Not really shameless author review! I'm writing this book just to challenge myself, it will not have a reeeeeally elaborate plot and it will probably have a lot of holes in the story as Dragon Ball is pretty confusing with all that alternative worlds and time loops, but at least I guarantee the grammar is good, at least better than most of the site. Anyway, just read it, if you like it, leave a review! If not, well....leave a review pointing out what I can improve!