Review Detail of MosbyYors in Child Of War And Death

The Author's worldbuilding is great. This story really reminds of Percy Jackson, I think this novel has great potential. The grammar and punctuation mistakes are very noticeable but that can be easily fixed with a few edits. Droy is really relatable. I hope he grows to be overpowered and like become more powerful than everybody else. Character descriptions are nice too. Very detailed especially to what they are wearing and what they look like. Although I do suggest that instead of meters, author should use feet to depict the height. hahaha I don't know how tall 1.8 meters is. The battle scenes are epic and I can see why the author chose this genre. Im really looking forward to more. Especially because this book is still in its early stages. Thank you for an original concept Author.