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Review Detail of MrBaskara in Phantom Dragon

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MrBaskara
MrBaskaraLv12yrMrBaskara

To be honest, there are not a lot of things about your world. The same goes for character design. It's just the occasional line about their shapes and faces. Not much to go with. The story pacing is average I'll say compared to other novels I've read.

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Phantom Dragon

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Sry to hear that, I will try to improve on that part of my story