Review Detail of MonokumaIzuru in Transmigrated As A Villain, The Heroines Are Also Reborn?
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I'm going to write this review (although I feel inadequate to make one, I will) first of all, the MC's thoughts are repeated a lot, things that get very tiring Second is the MC a fool or some kind of idiot? It is that it is something very obvious that you do not have to trust the system, it is more like you could kill yourself to find out if your theory is true that the system has some kind of affection or something like that Thirdly another protagonist seriously? I think that there is where the story dies for it does not finish convincing me to have to put up with two idiots I do not want to absolutely refuse (although it is very cliche in these types of villain novels) And fourthly, what bothered me the most about something that you implied is that not all the heroines regressed (something that attracted me to read this story) things that made them special and unique (entertaining) will not be there in some cases and that bothers me because I I liked that the past of the heroines because it added lore and a bit of world building and some literal character development gives a lot of input and on the subject of how they fall in love with the MC I like at least you gave him some history (because literally and without offending Chinese novels, women are very easy, literally a protagonist does anything and pam a woman for the protagonist) at least you gave him some history, which I like (I've seen things) I think that would be all and I hate being the bad guy but I had to say it and do this review because this novel has potential but I won't be here unless you remove the other protagonist, that's all I ask (because I know what to ask of you that all the heroines back down although it's a shame at least change the synopsis and put some heroines backed down because it creates the illusion that they all backed down if you don't clarify it and also change the title I don't want something similar to clickbait this story is better than that I really like the story) By the way, I will only answer the author and if he wants me to delete the criticism, I will gladly do it because I really liked this story, but the chapters "x heroine past" were entertaining [img=recommend][img=recommend] I apologize
Transmigrated As A Villain, The Heroines Are Also Reborn?
Dudedude5000
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First off, thank you for the review, I wasn't even aware that the MC's thoughts get repeated a lot until you mentioned it, but I can definitely see now that some of his thoughts does tend to get repeated from time to time, and I'll try my best to not to have him repeat his thoughts again unless if need be. To answer your questions (which contains heavy spoilers), I while try my best not to make Ronald too smart, as he was considered just 'average' back on earth, it wasn't my intention to make Ronald a complete fool either, it's just that since he's so used to the heroines making his life miserable in his previous life (coupled with the fact that he never wanted to acknowledge the heroine's love for him), he would rather follow the system's instructions and return back to earth as soon as possible rather than to stay an extra day in the world. Not only that, but since Ronald is extremely overpowered, Ronald cannot actually commit suicide through any means, and the only way he can actually die is if he meets someone stronger than him (Ronald never actually died in his previous life when he had jumped off the cliff in order to complete his suicide plot). And about the the additional protagonist, you shouldn't worry about him too much in the future because as Ronald has mentioned, Ling Feng has to die no matter what. As for the heroines not regressing, you're completely correct, I did imply that not all of the heroines had regressed, however, since this story is being told from a third person limited pov, not everything that is told is accurate, so I'll clear up the misunderstanding here(this is spoilers by the way). All of the heroines in the first half of the story (that also has interacted with Ronald in some way) either has or WILL get regressed back, it's just that their time of regression all differs. Hope this answers any of your questions and feel free to ask me more questions if you have any. Once again, thank you for the feedback and thanks for reading!
I understand but I'm a bit lost on the subject of heroines (or I'm too stupid to understand hahaha) And it also leaves me with a bad taste, leave this criticism so tomorrow I will remove it permanently or maybe today I don't like leaving this type of criticism and adding the fact that it is your first story (although it would have been interesting if a female protagonist appeared as a certain manhua "I I became the villain of my video game" it's very funny, there are a lot of references even if you don't take it very seriously when you see it) Be sure to see how this story progresses in the meantime[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Dudedude5000:First off, thank you for the review, I wasn't even aware that the MC's thoughts get repeated a lot until you mentioned it, but I can definitely see now that some of his thoughts does tend to get repeated from time to time, and I'll try my best to not to have him repeat his thoughts again unless if need be. To answer your questions (which contains heavy spoilers), I while try my best not to make Ronald too smart, as he was considered just 'average' back on earth, it wasn't my intention to make Ronald a complete fool either, it's just that since he's so used to the heroines making his life miserable in his previous life (coupled with the fact that he never wanted to acknowledge the heroine's love for him), he would rather follow the system's instructions and return back to earth as soon as possible rather than to stay an extra day in the world. Not only that, but since Ronald is extremely overpowered, Ronald cannot actually commit suicide through any means, and the only way he can actually die is if he meets someone stronger than him (Ronald never actually died in his previous life when he had jumped off the cliff in order to complete his suicide plot). And about the the additional protagonist, you shouldn't worry about him too much in the future because as Ronald has mentioned, Ling Feng has to die no matter what. As for the heroines not regressing, you're completely correct, I did imply that not all of the heroines had regressed, however, since this story is being told from a third person limited pov, not everything that is told is accurate, so I'll clear up the misunderstanding here(this is spoilers by the way). All of the heroines in the first half of the story (that also has interacted with Ronald in some way) either has or WILL get regressed back, it's just that their time of regression all differs. Hope this answers any of your questions and feel free to ask me more questions if you have any. Once again, thank you for the feedback and thanks for reading!