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stanpug
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It’s a fever dream of a story that feels like i’m having a stroke trying to understand what is happening. It jumps from one point to the next for no reason whatsoever. Like from one gym leader to the champion suddenly.

In pokemon starting with xerneas on Hiatus

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The issue of pacing is addressed in the chapter i talks about the gym leader to champion jump