There is one this that is annoying to me while reading this. it is that she internally says things in response to other people, except they are said in speech quotes. so as you read, she will say something and you will think that it is a bit odd to say that and then nobody will respond and then you realise its an internal monolgue or something and it just gets confusing and a little irritating because it keeps changing the flow of your reading experienc
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