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utterly terrible writing 1 introduction of toany characters at start confuses readers 2 level of stupidity of an entire village is unbelievable 3 telling readers at start that she will change the world in the future removes any form of immersion or relatability 4 MC travelled to another time with a space that can heal and grow stuff all great but then author decides to give her magic abilities as well and a little green sentient plant just to make own writing easier and worse and remove any requirement for explanations dropped chapter 16 not surprised author dropped before 100 if that is quality of writing under 20 chapters

The Village Girl Who Jinxes Her Husband Is Filthy Rich

Lilac in May

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