Review Detail of Xakier_Horu_Asura in Yuri Love : In Another World

Item: Yuri Love : In Another World
Rating: 4.4

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i just found this after i finish reading a yuri story but i do have to tell you is pretty darn good then the other yuri i have read in the past so i would rate this at 4.4 ,the ONLY complain i have it just the grammer but later on the story, it starts getting better keep up the good work.(ﾉ*>∀<)ﾉ♡

Yuri Love : In Another World

Asdark13

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glad to hear this... i will try to rewrite the initial chapters and make them good too

1yr

Xakier_Horu_AsuraLv4Xakier_Horu_Asura

Well i have to review it again in the future when you correct your gammer mistake's until then i will continue reading the story.

Asdark13:glad to hear this... i will try to rewrite the initial chapters and make them good too

1yr