Review Detail of Egoko in RE:BORN Zombie
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Above average novel at most. It has "I'm a Spider, So What" vibes, but the development of the story feels slightly bland? It's too straightforward, so it became difficult to maintain interest as I kept reading. It's not a bad book, but it can certainly be improved as the author is a bit lazy in his writing style.
RE:BORN Zombie
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All the best, my man. Just be more detailed with the system, not too repetitive, and keep proper track of the developments in the system. Clarity in the little things can do wonders for the quality of your storytelling. Especially in system-related novels. A certain degree of predictability also inculcates a dopamine response in the reader, which makes us more attached to the novel.
Killix_Kreed:🤧battle against the flesh. I can only do better in future books💪💪