Review Detail of OtakuSociety09 in RWBY: The Time Bender

Item: RWBY: The Time Bender
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

OtakuSociety09Lv12yrOtakuSociety09

The written quality is good and understandable. Story development is also great, but I feel it went 1 to 100 pretty quickly after the betrayal. The character design is amazing, I like how you describe the emotions of MC and the portrayal of the situation. The world background is RWBY.

RWBY: The Time Bender

BombsAhoy626

Liked it!

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OtakuSociety09Lv1OtakuSociety09

I think it was fine going 1 to 100. Since it would get annoying if the mc took so long to take revenge.

BombsAhoy626:I had a hard time with the betrayal, so the 1-100 is something I wasn't sure I totally liked, but I had to just go with it at that point

2yr

BombsAhoy626AuthorBombsAhoy626

I had a hard time with the betrayal, so the 1-100 is something I wasn't sure I totally liked, but I had to just go with it at that point

2yr

BalladLv5Ballad

Will MC be your typical RWBY MC who joins Beacon and drinks the whole Hero of Justice Kool aid?

1yr