Review Detail of lord_3 in Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard

the author has relatively unpolished Grammer in the beginning and I believe he has taken steps to "repair" his earlier chapters but by later on his Grammer has shown great improvement. the story overall is one of the better hp fanfics out there the pace is a bit slower but it does nothing but adds to the story. the mc has a variety of special abilities but none of them are plot breaking, and the mc's growth in power feels slow, natural and unforced.