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Review Detail of HopeBones5 in Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard

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HopeBones5
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overall story felt very flat with with the extras they just didnt hook mr into reading it and eventually made it so that all character interactions outside of Luna felt dull and uninspired why have an HP story if you aren't going to flesh out any of the side characters?

Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard

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Until which part did you read?

HopeBones5
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I read just past chapter 20 ish, it just felt very dull to me overall not necessarily Mary Sue but felt lifeless.