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Being attached to your old name and fighting to keep it would be one thing, but Red is too damn weird. The general structure and grammar is lacking too, but the whole Red thing made me lose interest and is what stuck out the most.
Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard
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Being honest, should I put a had at the beginning about the name? Many have complained, to my surprise, it was the beginning of the story, it's not like I changed it in the middle, where it would be very forceful. If I were to change it it would be a lot of work and I haven't even finished making some corrections to the translation, I don't speak English so I can't tell if the grammar is correct or not, I'm sorry if it's misunderstood or looks weird.