over all the fanfic is amazing. OP MC, tons of sex with heroines, good writing quality and the effort put to build up a logical romance is much more than most fanfics out there butttt what it lacks the most in my opinion is the fluff. The mc and heroines turn out to be nymphos and have just s*x in their mind most of the time so basically the fanfic is a repeat of have s*x with girl A then fight scenes then s*x with girl B and the cycle continues and any scenes of fluff are basically summarized in two sentences and skipped off
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