Review Detail of traveler_dream in Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System

"Origin Court: Accepting Disciples with a System" is an intriguing novel with an interesting premise. The concept of a system to help a protagonist grow and become powerful is not new, but the author manages to give it a fresh spin in this story. The protagonist's journey as he navigates the challenges of the Origin Court is engaging and the world-building is well done. The cultivation system in the novel is also well-explained and easy to follow. However, there are some issues with the pacing of the story, particularly in the early chapters where there seems to be a rush to get to the more action-packed scenes. Additionally, some of the characters feel underdeveloped and lack depth, making it difficult to connect with them on an emotional level. Overall, "Origin Court: Accepting Disciples with a System" is a decent read for fans of cultivation novels, but it could benefit from some improvements in character development and pacing.