Review Detail of DaoistzqOzg4 in Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System

I am here again to do another review for the novel. If you want to read this, you may have to consider the points I am going to point out. Writing Quality: Check Stability of Updates: Currently check. Story Development: Reading up 'til the latest chapter, I realized that the story is really developing well. If you are confused with some chapters, particularly chapters 40-60, you would be confused why the mc would choose to be lowkey despite his power. He could just terrorize everyone with his powers and use it to find his target (u will know if u've read it coz he's too overpowered). However, he didn't do that and it seemed like it was done on purpose to make him realize that being passive wouldn't always be the solution to every problem he is facing. It seems like in the next arc, he would really change, I can tell. Perhaps. I hope so. Character Design: The main character's personality is a bit twisted. I think that not everyone in reality is consistent with what they say or do as well, so it's quite reasonable to me. I think his thinking and philosophies about the world are not yet mature despite his soul's(???) age. On the other hand, I really love his two present disciples. They're quite likable. World Background: It wasn't as stable as it was in the beginning, but it was getting clearer as the story progresses. Overall, keep it up, author-nim!