Review Detail of Golden_Raise in King of succubus
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King of succubus
Golden_raise
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Dragon8992:I stopped reading this novel due to gender errors where a girl is described as his.Pls edit the errors as it is very off putting
Hmm, you are right and wrong at the same time. You are right because subjectively speaking, since the mc is male it is therefore normal to call it that. But objectively speaking, the novel is refocused on an incubus that lives in a universe where there are almost no incubus. The title "king of succubus" is drawn in connection with the objective of the novel. If you read a little more, you will understand why the title is so named. Thank you for your comments.
Reacix:Succubus is considered a female succubi who seduces men, while incubus is the opposite. So shouldn’t the title be King of Incubus or King of Incubi?
Golden_Raise:Hmm, you are right and wrong at the same time. You are right because subjectively speaking, since the mc is male it is therefore normal to call it that. But objectively speaking, the novel is refocused on an incubus that lives in a universe where there are almost no incubus. The title "king of succubus" is drawn in connection with the objective of the novel. If you read a little more, you will understand why the title is so named. Thank you for your comments.
I don't understand why there is lot of gender mistake. grammar is good but how come there is gender mistake?
Golden_Raise:Hmm, you are right and wrong at the same time. You are right because subjectively speaking, since the mc is male it is therefore normal to call it that. But objectively speaking, the novel is refocused on an incubus that lives in a universe where there are almost no incubus. The title "king of succubus" is drawn in connection with the objective of the novel. If you read a little more, you will understand why the title is so named. Thank you for your comments.
This was because of my rush during the translation. Since English is not my official language, then I preferred to write the text in French and translate it into English through a college. But since I trusted my translator, I left him the work of translation without checking the text after its translation. It was only after receiving a lot of complaints about this that I took matters into my own hands and tried to improve the texts as best I could. If you advance in reading, you will understand that there will be fewer and fewer of these annoying errors.
DaoistwbmFUB:I don't understand why there is lot of gender mistake. grammar is good but how come there is gender mistake?
Golden_Raise:This was because of my rush during the translation. Since English is not my official language, then I preferred to write the text in French and translate it into English through a college. But since I trusted my translator, I left him the work of translation without checking the text after its translation. It was only after receiving a lot of complaints about this that I took matters into my own hands and tried to improve the texts as best I could. If you advance in reading, you will understand that there will be fewer and fewer of these annoying errors.
Hi, i think it’s better if u use grammarly to write your novel. It helps u write better. The advertisements for this free software is everwhere and personally it helps me write a good paper for my uni modules. I recommend it!
Golden_Raise:Okay, I would do my best to improve further. Thanks for the comment
