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Reading Status: C21 Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 3/5 The total score: 4.2 The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy. The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more. I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green. The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se. The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTR Otherwise, good job.

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Supreme Harem God System

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thank you for the detailed review❤️ actually, i am trying to avoid info dump as much as possible. mc is too weak so knowing about the world won't really matter. however I believe at the pace we are going, chapter 40 will be where I will introduce the world. also, don't worry, kingdom building tag is not a click bait. as mentioned in the synopsis, he will go from mortal, to a b*y t*y, to an emperor

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That seems incredible to me, otherwise I can't wait to see how the MC gets stronger (both in cultivation strength and personality) and dominates everything around him without limits! When I read more chapters I will review again. You really do a great job!

SleepDeprivedSloth:thank you for the detailed review❤️ actually, i am trying to avoid info dump as much as possible. mc is too weak so knowing about the world won't really matter. however I believe at the pace we are going, chapter 40 will be where I will introduce the world. also, don't worry, kingdom building tag is not a click bait. as mentioned in the synopsis, he will go from mortal, to a b*y t*y, to an emperor
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