I'm giving my own work 5 stars. Yes, I'm that shameless, but an honest review from you guys would be appreciated. I'm actually quite nervous because my reader probably wouldn't like this work, but I'm trying my best to walk out of my comfort zone Well, Peace Out!
Nine_Clouds
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LIKELayios:Kaijuu power, in the synopsis it's like you're describing another form of energy like mana 🤔 Anyways grammar i'm sure it will be good since you already have prior experience. So, is this a ff ? Novel like he reincarnated into a random world not a anime one.?
so I'm a little confused about the MC. he supposedly cared about the coach and the other girl, yet he kills himself and leaves them behind. doesn't actually seem like he cares about them much. were they romantically involved and will he see them again somehow? oh and is the MC going to be this emotionally dead the whole story?
Nine_Clouds:It is a harem
Hayate will see them again later. Also, he's not mentally dead, you'll know when reading more chapters
Malcolm_Massey:so I'm a little confused about the MC. he supposedly cared about the coach and the other girl, yet he kills himself and leaves them behind. doesn't actually seem like he cares about them much. were they romantically involved and will he see them again somehow? oh and is the MC going to be this emotionally dead the whole story?
Nine_Clouds:Hayate will see them again later. Also, he's not mentally dead, you'll know when reading more chapters
Is this A Fast Phase kind of FF?? .. I'm at chaps 2 and I can only think that his Development is fast...and it feels wiered how he lacks reaction when he recieve his power.. Also his background in his past life lacks more info.. Maybe he can go back in his previous life world? ?. . But still an interesting Story.. I'm gonna continue reading up to chap 30 before I can judge again...
Jheydi327:Is this A Fast Phase kind of FF?? .. I'm at chaps 2 and I can only think that his Development is fast...and it feels wiered how he lacks reaction when he recieve his power.. Also his background in his past life lacks more info.. Maybe he can go back in his previous life world? ?. . But still an interesting Story.. I'm gonna continue reading up to chap 30 before I can judge again...