Review Detail of CaliburnG2 in nommorus

Note: I have read up to chapter 22. Some spoilers up ahead. Well, I believe Chase_Xavier's words perfectly replicate mine, except mine is a bit harsher. There are quite a lot of stuff in this novel that makes you go "What in god's name is going on?", and some nonsensical stuff here and there. Writing Quality- It's okay, I suppose. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes, words not capitalized, misspellings, and the flow of the story is a bit off. It's not something that will make you go, "Wow! This is great!" but it's just a bit below average. 2.5/5 Story development: Man, oh man. This might be the weakest point of the series. There are many times where you don't even know what is going on, or why is such a thing happening. One of said examples is Jeremy, in the whole castles. Also, have you heard of the phrase "Curiosity killed the cat"? Well, the MC is the cat here, except he isn't dead yet. From the get-go, in the earlier chapters when he has been apparently fighting for days and is tired, he somehow thinks it's a good idea to try and know some of the mysteries of the town that wants to kill him, despite the fact the town is currently infested with beings that want to kill him. That also kind of conflicts with what we knew about the Main Character in the first chapter, as it states that he lacks passion, and has no envy and greed, and yet that definitely doesn't seem to be the case. And let's not talk about the girl he meets along the way, which, for whatever reason, begins caring for her. Look, I'm all in for character development, but when you go slaughtering many beings without batting an eye and have no problem thinking about killing an old man at the first chapters, I see no reason at all to somehow feel attached to some girl. Character development, yes, but there is no development here. It's like me killing many beings without giving a damn about them, and I suddenly care about one person for no reason whatsoever. Definitely the weakest point. 2/5 Character Design: And now, this is probably the strongest trait this story has. The characters are pretty nice, although bland at times. What interested me the most was their abilities, as they all had unique abilities that could be used in a clever way. Not to mention, some of the designs for the characters are pretty nice, especially a few of them that were eldritch in design. What can I say, I'm a sucker for eldritch/lovecraftian beings. 3.5/5. World Background: Not bad, not great, simply average. We aren't given many details on the world. No history on them, just tiny tidbits of information here and there, but nothing spectacular. 3/5. Although that should not discourage you, as there are some genuinely interesting ideas here, and I'm generally far harsher when it comes to criticism, so while this might be an a-okay book for me, it might be an amazing book for you. Not to mention, the chapters keep getting better and better bit by bit, although not a spectacular pace. Overall, it's not for me, personally. But depending on your tastes, I'd say give it a try.