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Review Detail of DreamingAwake in Sword God in a World of Magic

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DreamingAwake
DreamingAwakeLv121yrDreamingAwake

160 chapters review the novel is good at the beginning but the pace is very slow the magic system is quite organized although I don't like the fights they take too long they explain too much and the MC is traumatized for having killed people who deserved to die. He has personality problems from his past on earth; also people are extremely talkative the protagonist just says ah ah and they respond like 56 paragraphs trying to change MC way of thinking I don't understand how this happens, but is annoying. instead I would like more worlbuilding explaining how the world works.

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Sword God in a World of Magic

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GG_Slayer
GG_SlayerLv4GG_Slayer

Bro think a normal person killing for the first time isn't going to be traumatized

Supreme_Slaughter
Supreme_SlaughterLv1Supreme_Slaughter

Please try my new novel Protagonist Devourer ( There might be only one chapter but please help me point out and would love if you could introdue some things to add)

DreamingAwake
DreamingAwakeLv12DreamingAwake

I'll look into 👍

Supreme_Slaughter:Please try my new novel Protagonist Devourer ( There might be only one chapter but please help me point out and would love if you could introdue some things to add)
Supreme_Slaughter
Supreme_SlaughterLv1Supreme_Slaughter

I Kindia changed it look into the second chapter to clarify any doubts.

DreamingAwake:I'll look into 👍
GeorgeM05
GeorgeM05Lv11GeorgeM05

The pace is slow to build upon the world and show you how much he is struggling with choosing humanity or power.