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Review Detail of Serendipityy in Sword God in a World of Magic

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Serendipityy
SerendipityyLv21yrSerendipityy

From the premise beginning this novel already has cringe, cliche, nonsense backstory haish. Not worth it

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Sword God in a World of Magic

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VasiliosReid
VasiliosReidLv14VasiliosReid

I feel like this comment itself isn't giving the Novel, which is a masterpiece, it's fair share. It's an excellently written Novel with clear character development. Now whether or not the development in question is good is purely subjective.

Fahrenx
FahrenxLv14Fahrenx

not really character development when mc just makes same mistake over and over...

VasiliosReid:I feel like this comment itself isn't giving the Novel, which is a masterpiece, it's fair share. It's an excellently written Novel with clear character development. Now whether or not the development in question is good is purely subjective.
ruferto
rufertoLv15ruferto

there's no character development for the MC. zero. he remains an edgy teen mentally even ~700 chapters in when he supposed to be like 600yrs old or whatever

VasiliosReid:I feel like this comment itself isn't giving the Novel, which is a masterpiece, it's fair share. It's an excellently written Novel with clear character development. Now whether or not the development in question is good is purely subjective.
GloveWithHoles
GloveWithHolesLv3GloveWithHoles

A masterpiece would be stretching this to the extreme. By no means is this a masterpiece at all. The plot feels forced and although the side characters are good, the main one is illogical to a degree that it wouldn't be excusable under the pretense that it is "Just apart of the fantasy genre". The author's decision for the protagonist to be antisocial and make very little friends does not make sense; especially when the protagonist was very extroverted and sociable in his past life. Shang's development feels very forced and illogical, especially when the author explains the logistics of something to great detail as well. Character development is subjective to a degree, but not as much as you make it sound it out to be.

VasiliosReid:I feel like this comment itself isn't giving the Novel, which is a masterpiece, it's fair share. It's an excellently written Novel with clear character development. Now whether or not the development in question is good is purely subjective.
UMO
UMOLv2UMO

bro really said masterpiece 💀💀💀

VasiliosReid:I feel like this comment itself isn't giving the Novel, which is a masterpiece, it's fair share. It's an excellently written Novel with clear character development. Now whether or not the development in question is good is purely subjective.
GENGHIS_KHAN
GENGHIS_KHANLv13GENGHIS_KHAN

Not a masterpiece

VasiliosReid:I feel like this comment itself isn't giving the Novel, which is a masterpiece, it's fair share. It's an excellently written Novel with clear character development. Now whether or not the development in question is good is purely subjective.
GeorgeM05
GeorgeM05Lv11GeorgeM05

He is never an edgy teen, He is normal person, Did you even read the same novel?

ruferto:there's no character development for the MC. zero. he remains an edgy teen mentally even ~700 chapters in when he supposed to be like 600yrs old or whatever
Beziik
BeziikLv13Beziik

Let me guess, you're 15

GeorgeM05:He is never an edgy teen, He is normal person, Did you even read the same novel?
GeorgeM05
GeorgeM05Lv11GeorgeM05

I'm 18, but I don't get what that has to do with him acting like a normal person and not a complete psychopath as soon as he transmigated

Beziik:Let me guess, you're 15
Beziik
BeziikLv13Beziik

It's ok, you'll grow out of it ... or not but in that case yikes

GeorgeM05:I'm 18, but I don't get what that has to do with him acting like a normal person and not a complete psychopath as soon as he transmigated
GeorgeM05
GeorgeM05Lv11GeorgeM05

Grow out of what?

Beziik:It's ok, you'll grow out of it ... or not but in that case yikes