Great worldbuilding with unique beasts, world, and aspects overall that feel very original. The only thing holding the novel back is the author feels the need to explain why something happens and why that why makes that why happen. A single interaction between two characters will take several chapters just because the author always says "Why?" and then proceeds to explain every little excruciating detail so 80% of the novel just ends up being an expostion. The author needs to understand that the readers are not dumb. We can understand context clues. The best stories are told through dialogue not narration.
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