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Review Detail of iHaveNoComfy in Sword God in a World of Magic

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iHaveNoComfy
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TLDR: Read it or I will find you. Ive never written a review before of a more developed book before and at this point ive read thousands of series novel or graphic novel. I can confidently say while this isnt an issth it certainly can be and has the setup to touch that level of excellence. Anyways with that out of the way hopefully youll take this seriously and just take my word for it but if you need more then here we go Writing Quality: The writing quality of this novel is borderline perfect. The pacing is perfect, expression of both visual and non visual, tangible and the non tangible, is perfect. I have absolute no issues understanding at any given point what is happening in the novel and I will always have a clear image and feeling to accompany it. The grammar is also near perfect I know ive seen a typo before on this novel but its been awhile and it only happened once or twice so that should speak for itself. Updating Stability: Since ive started reading this book which was around 140 chapters ish. The release schedule has always been 2 chapters a day and to be honest I have no clue how the author does it but I wont focus on that lol. Even when the author had to take a break because they broke both their wrists and still managed to type a couple chapters during the break is just pure insanity and I cant respect them enough for it. The care and perseverance the author has is clear and leaves room for no doubt. Story Development: As ive said already the pacing is perfect but aside from that the development of the story is just amazing to see. Everything unfolds as if im actually there nothing ever being too much or too little. The ideas and plot that are created and shown throughout the novel so far has been incredible and over almost 400 chapters now has never left me bored and ive always been looking forward to whats next. Always keep in mind though that the nothing is at it seems and no character or place has security here. Character Development: I can confidently say this is the authors strongest ability in writing. The ability to artistically and flawlessly depict the ups and downs to the extremes on both ends of a characters mentality and being able to change over and over again without feeling like a different character or having stagnant development character wise but never feeling truly the same. Every character written here feels like you could plop them into real life and id never mnow the difference if I only judged them from the personality stance and not that most if not all of them could kill me in at least a dozen ways outside of realistic means. As a last note all the characters that are special anyways have a uniqueness to them that seperates them clearly but also links them in way, almost like he created his own culture within the book but never explaines the majority of it and simply had them act according to how they would act in given culture. World Background: At 300 something chapters we still dont know hardly anything about the full world we only have One extreme over another. What I can say is that the setting in all stages of the book so far have been established perfectly and what details we do know about the world has never been shown through a horrific wall of text that induces hatred of all things like a lot of web novels do. Anyways to wrap things up this is an incredible novel and if it wasnt for the 300 something chapters I would say its at the quality of anything beyond your normal web novel and truly feels like a novel written by a proffesional, experienced, skilled, and highly creative author. P,S, Once again this is my first review ever and I dont know a whole about literaure an writing from an acedemic stand point so you can take what I say for a grain of salt ignoring my experience in reading these kinds of things. And if the author ever see’s this I highly reccomend you read the Young Elites series it has a similar feel and is also very very high in quality. Also please bring more of the crazy exploding fire guy I miss him already (dont worry what I said was not a spoiler) Thanks for reading :)

Sword God in a World of Magic

Warmaisach

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iHaveNoComfy
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Also warning if you are looking to relate to this mc I am warning you morality is a major issue touched upon constantly in this novel and lets just say things start to go a bit unfavorable compared to most irl peoples morality so just be careful there

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Thank you very much for the long, positive, and very thorough review.

iHaveNoComfy
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No problem lol

Warmaisach:Thank you very much for the long, positive, and very thorough review.