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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv131yrTreacherousVoid

This story is good, however, i havent seen any reviews really criticizing anything, so ill have to do it myself. First, the author seems to enjoy wasting time rambling needlessly for chapters on end. A simple trimp from a village to the academy took like 20 chapters for no reason, it could have been handled within 5. Second, i noticed that he attempts to make the MC appear smart in the initial chapters but it just comes across as forced and makes the MC look dumber because his “smarts” are common sense lol (BUT because it was the initial chapters ima let that slide) Third, once again coming back to the authors rambling. Each action and even that take place do NOT need to be 5-10 chapters long lol, not ever event is that important and shouldnt be drawn out for the word count. Fourth, (just a pet peeve of mine) i feel that the MC is very naive for no reason. Like not in the normal sense of the word but hes very easily influenced?? If that makes sense. Like, he sees some man fly, and freaks out and starts “respecting him” (even though this dude literally met GOD 5 seconds ago) I dont know it is just weird, this kind of stuff happens a lot. (Anyways, loving the story so far author, hope you dont do anything so outrageous that i end up dropping, youd be suprised how many times that happens)

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Sword God in a World of Magic

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ExArgentum
ExArgentumLv14ExArgentum

Wish more people reviewed like you and actually write about the novel. Literally the only review I gained knowledge from.

TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13TreacherousVoid

Thanks lol, i feel like people just be spamming 5* reviews for no reason lol so i sometimes have to be mean 💀

ExArgentum:Wish more people reviewed like you and actually write about the novel. Literally the only review I gained knowledge from.
Foo_Yung
Foo_YungLv13Foo_Yung

Every time I read a review on this story there seemed to be no criticism at all. I legit thought I was weird because the rambling was boring me to tears. Glad it's not just me. I've actually dropped the book simply because of the wasted text. I don't fault the story, I'm just not a man of patience. I need plot substance or at the very least relationship building and after 22 chapters the only thing I've got is less time to live. Unfortunate. Anyway, I hope everyone else enjoys the story. It definitely has potential. You just need more patience than me.

Brunnopm1
Brunnopm1Lv12Brunnopm1

Also, mc changes personality like his clothes, most often between ducking extremes, he goes from i don’t want to hurt that, oh no i just hurt that, i feel bad for it, since i already hurt that let’s throw any morality and empathy to the window and be a ducking murderous sociopath

ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

Thank for the warning, I don't like inconsistent like that. Btw what chapte you guy have readed ?

Brunnopm1:Also, mc changes personality like his clothes, most often between ducking extremes, he goes from i don’t want to hurt that, oh no i just hurt that, i feel bad for it, since i already hurt that let’s throw any morality and empathy to the window and be a ducking murderous sociopath
Brunnopm1
Brunnopm1Lv12Brunnopm1

Latest one. It does get better.

ArashiTenebris:Thank for the warning, I don't like inconsistent like that. Btw what chapte you guy have readed ?
MonioD
MonioDLv2MonioD

he is consistent now

Brunnopm1:Also, mc changes personality like his clothes, most often between ducking extremes, he goes from i don’t want to hurt that, oh no i just hurt that, i feel bad for it, since i already hurt that let’s throw any morality and empathy to the window and be a ducking murderous sociopath
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TreacherousVoid
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