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Warmaisach
WarmaisachAuthor1yrWarmaisach

Five stars because I like my story. Welcome to my second novel! I already wrote and (nearly, depending on when you read this) finished my first novel Lightning Is the only Way at over 1300 chapters. There have been some mistakes in my first novel since it was, well, my first novel. This one is my second novel, and I rectified those mistakes. When I write, I mainly focus on emotions. It doesn't matter which one, power, loss, depression, happiness, whatever. I believe novels have to evoke emotions in the reader, and that's what I focus on. You can give me whatever feedback you want, as long as it's actual feedback. Have fun reading!

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Sword God in a World of Magic

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Asura707
Asura707Lv12Asura707

Is Lightning is the only Way close to done or will there still be more chapters?

Kuykendall
KuykendallLv14Kuykendall

I’ve noticed in LitOW that you use the word ‘yet’ a lot and the word ‘however’ to a lesser degree. This is not criticism, but if I’m the future you are looking for words that express the same meaning while not seeming repetitive, a thasuras will help in that regard, assuming of course you don’t know about said thasuras. Best regards. P.s. I’m the same guy who suggested you release 5 chapters every 100th chapter, and you know how that went over.

AMAN_KUMAR_LAL
AMAN_KUMAR_LALLv1AMAN_KUMAR_LAL

please add romantic and harem to this venture because I think you can pull off realistic romantic emotions. So please!!!!

Dstep24
Dstep24Lv15Dstep24

*Thesaurus

Kuykendall:I’ve noticed in LitOW that you use the word ‘yet’ a lot and the word ‘however’ to a lesser degree. This is not criticism, but if I’m the future you are looking for words that express the same meaning while not seeming repetitive, a thasuras will help in that regard, assuming of course you don’t know about said thasuras. Best regards. P.s. I’m the same guy who suggested you release 5 chapters every 100th chapter, and you know how that went over.
Asura707
Asura707Lv12Asura707

yes romance like LitOW but no harem please

AMAN_KUMAR_LAL:please add romantic and harem to this venture because I think you can pull off realistic romantic emotions. So please!!!!
diablo247
diablo247Lv4diablo247

I loved Litow. I like how you focus on emotions, thereby making the characters relatable. Moreover, you clearly demonstrate how cruel the cultivation world is. You know, in the majority of the novels I have read, the MC always has it easy or has been gifted some item that makes his cultivation journey easy. But in Litow, you have outlined how hard the MC's life is and how he had to truly work to achieve his goals. I only came across Litow towards the end of February and have been supporting it as much as it is within my means. Your second novel also has an amazing start and I will do my best to support you. These may sound like empty words to you as I am unable to actually support you by buying golden tickets or privilege chapters. I hope I was able to convey how special Litow was to me and I'm sure the new novel will be the same.

Warmaisach
WarmaisachAuthorWarmaisach

thank you for your words.

diablo247:I loved Litow. I like how you focus on emotions, thereby making the characters relatable. Moreover, you clearly demonstrate how cruel the cultivation world is. You know, in the majority of the novels I have read, the MC always has it easy or has been gifted some item that makes his cultivation journey easy. But in Litow, you have outlined how hard the MC's life is and how he had to truly work to achieve his goals. I only came across Litow towards the end of February and have been supporting it as much as it is within my means. Your second novel also has an amazing start and I will do my best to support you. These may sound like empty words to you as I am unable to actually support you by buying golden tickets or privilege chapters. I hope I was able to convey how special Litow was to me and I'm sure the new novel will be the same.
Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13Lazy_Chicken_God

Two questions Romance/harem? Does the Mc use magic?

Warmaisach
WarmaisachAuthorWarmaisach

Not answering any of those two questions.

Lazy_Chicken_God:Two questions Romance/harem? Does the Mc use magic?
Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13Lazy_Chicken_God

Ok

Warmaisach:Not answering any of those two questions.
tortle
tortleLv3tortle

first one is a vey important question because as a reader, I don't wanna waste time and then give you a 1 star review because it was not what I was looking for.

Warmaisach:Not answering any of those two questions.
BlurryBee
BlurryBeeLv13BlurryBee

Reviews based on purely wanting the story to adopt a trope YOU want personally are useless anyways :)

tortle:first one is a vey important question because as a reader, I don't wanna waste time and then give you a 1 star review because it was not what I was looking for.
KornKob
KornKobLv5KornKob

Not how reviews work, at that point you're just being a child who didn't get what he wanted

tortle:first one is a vey important question because as a reader, I don't wanna waste time and then give you a 1 star review because it was not what I was looking for.
tortle
tortleLv3tortle

that's the point...why would someone read what they doesn't want and that's why they ask or look into tags but here is someone who doesn't wanna answer...that leads to readers wasting their time and lastly giving bad reviews. And it's ok because I am over this, why would I even read this when I am getting this type of response just because of a simple question.

KornKob:Not how reviews work, at that point you're just being a child who didn't get what he wanted
GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14GifflarGod

I think the novel would attract more readers if you made the name of the novel shorter. the current name sounds like name of many of those trash novels. like those "sign in" or those "i trained for 10000 years and became invincible" I mean the name is fitting and clearly tells what the novel is about but it's still bit too long. Maybe something not so direct..

Warmaisach
WarmaisachAuthorWarmaisach

Not a big fan of the name too, but it's sadly necessary on Webnovel. I have gotten quite a lot of feedback that a lot of people didn't even consider reading Lightning Is the Only Way because of the name.

GifflarGod:I think the novel would attract more readers if you made the name of the novel shorter. the current name sounds like name of many of those trash novels. like those "sign in" or those "i trained for 10000 years and became invincible" I mean the name is fitting and clearly tells what the novel is about but it's still bit too long. Maybe something not so direct..
GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14GifflarGod

how is it necessary? there are plenty of novels with short names that are up there. and those novels are webnovel originals. I think you've gotten so much audience from your first novel that many would read this novel just because we know that you wrote lighting is the only way and we know you are good writer

Warmaisach:Not a big fan of the name too, but it's sadly necessary on Webnovel. I have gotten quite a lot of feedback that a lot of people didn't even consider reading Lightning Is the Only Way because of the name.
Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13Jheydi327

FR. ..

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Dragon8992
Dragon8992Lv15Dragon8992

Is there a fema lead and romance?le

UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11UncleDodger

will he be op from the start? or he training to get stronger?