Review Detail of Listlessthomas in The Herb King
Review detail
Ah well to be completely honest with you the novel is kinda bad I like the whole idea of a herbalist / doctor but the author is just spoon feeding the character who is 3 years old with broken ability’s that takes no effort for him to learn or comprehend and it’s it’s all in the form of a system. one of the sections in the chapter said wow I wish I could follow my dad if only I had a Disguise technique then badabing badaboom the system gave him one like why even give him his previous life’ memories if he can just insta learn anything in the world, then he was like “I hope my my mom dosent see me” n I think we can all know where that’s going yeah you guessed it system coming in with the clutch. So yeah I’ve read a lot of trash with horrible plots but this novels pacing just takes the cake so read at your own risk hood luck comrades.
The Herb King
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I don't know how to say it, but the novel is very similar to what you find on the Chinese novel site faloo So I give it from acceptable to good. This is if you a writer with experience of less than a year or two. But if I was a professional with experience of three years or more, I give it from bad to worse But do not stop writing, there are people who read your novels . Oh one more thing my English is not my first language .
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bruh.... he never said you are lazy 😂 ...... all he said was that pacing is bad & the system is clutch ?!9👀
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Lol you twisted his words Mr. Author…all he said is that you gave the MC a cliche spoon feeding system…never said you were lazy, but you came to that conclusion youself that he meant you were “lazy”, I wonder why you thought that🫢…dont be the kind of guy to change someone’s words into something that was never said😁….I’m still going to read it tho, i like reading about characters with OP abilities, so lucky me🤩
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Thanks for the defense sadly I didn’t get to see the author’s response though judging by the last three comments looks like I hit a nerv lol. Don’t get me wrong I read alottt of garbage and I like garbage personally but idk this one just rubbed me wrong everything felt like it was done on the spot with zero revision at the time which is good sometimes because when authors get inspiration it’s awesome but I think it shoulda been read over a few more times to fix some glaring issues. Also I wasn’t saying he’s bad or lazy… just said his poorly executed cliche e-novel was bad if he took it any other way I mean oops 🤭🤭
Young_fruit_Smiley:bruh.... he never said you are lazy 😂 ...... all he said was that pacing is bad & the system is clutch ?!9👀