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Please edit the novel good so that we can understand also please make mc somewhat stronger. And make him use his own rewards for himself. The story is very good. And also make the MC's character somewhat intelligent. Also give him good skills. ☺☺
Strongest Sect in the Shadows
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Thanks for replying my comment. Actually this is one of the novels I am starting to like as for why I said mc to use rewards for himself was actually to not embarrass himself when he is the sect leader. Yes the English is good of course but there is a difference between understanding it and actually enjoy or comfortable while reading it. Well as this is the start of the novel it is good if you ask me if I compare. So I won't complain. While what I mean by mc being clever is I mean he is only in qi refinement, but already waged a huge sale war. Well the plot is authors of course what I mean is make mc some what cautious but not as a loner. ☺☺☺Also I like all the plots. If the novel goes smoothly, I will become a continuous reader and it will become a big sensation. Also you mentioned about how you take more time to write a chapter , ☺☺ it seems you care a lot of beginning plot, I appreciate it but please update the novel in a good manner.
IamMountTai:I don't think my English writing was poor, considering I am a native. I will give the whole novel an edit then (usually I don't edit the chapters I immediately upload until a day later). I understand what you are saying in regards to the Mc's true strength, its getting there. However, please keep in mind the mc is basically broken for his level thanks to the starter package. 90% of MCs in another novels would not have the stuff he has right now. He will be half-overpowered. Rewards are shared in the sect. It's a sect development story too ya know. Most of it goes and is managed by the Mc ofc. As for his intelligence, I think I made him appropriately smart already. Moreover, there will be some huge reflections on his himself coming right up in the next few chapters.
I don't think my English writing was poor, considering I am a native. I will give the whole novel an edit then (usually I don't edit the chapters I immediately upload until a day later). I understand what you are saying in regards to the Mc's true strength, its getting there. However, please keep in mind the mc is basically broken for his level thanks to the starter package. 90% of MCs in another novels would not have the stuff he has right now. He will be half-overpowered. Rewards are shared in the sect. It's a sect development story too ya know. Most of it goes and is managed by the Mc ofc. As for his intelligence, I think I made him appropriately smart already. Moreover, there will be some huge reflections on his himself coming right up in the next few chapters.
Kv_Bhanusai:Thanks for replying my comment. Actually this is one of the novels I am starting to like as for why I said mc to use rewards for himself was actually to not embarrass himself when he is the sect leader. Yes the English is good of course but there is a difference between understanding it and actually enjoy or comfortable while reading it. Well as this is the start of the novel it is good if you ask me if I compare. So I won't complain. While what I mean by mc being clever is I mean he is only in qi refinement, but already waged a huge sale war. Well the plot is authors of course what I mean is make mc some what cautious but not as a loner. ☺☺☺Also I like all the plots. If the novel goes smoothly, I will become a continuous reader and it will become a big sensation. Also you mentioned about how you take more time to write a chapter , ☺☺ it seems you care a lot of beginning plot, I appreciate it but please update the novel in a good manner.
Kv_Bhanusai:Thanks for replying my comment. Actually this is one of the novels I am starting to like as for why I said mc to use rewards for himself was actually to not embarrass himself when he is the sect leader. Yes the English is good of course but there is a difference between understanding it and actually enjoy or comfortable while reading it. Well as this is the start of the novel it is good if you ask me if I compare. So I won't complain. While what I mean by mc being clever is I mean he is only in qi refinement, but already waged a huge sale war. Well the plot is authors of course what I mean is make mc some what cautious but not as a loner. ☺☺☺Also I like all the plots. If the novel goes smoothly, I will become a continuous reader and it will become a big sensation. Also you mentioned about how you take more time to write a chapter , ☺☺ it seems you care a lot of beginning plot, I appreciate it but please update the novel in a good manner.