Review Detail of Shape_Matters in Reborn into Hyuga
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so... the author fails to establish a solid foundation for the story. We don't know when, where, who, and how. we only that he is born as a hyuga. We see his mom die in the first chapter. Two guys are introduce and the author fails to properly tell us who they are beside one being a servant and the other one is an elder. He never really tells us who they are to the MC and gets them all mixed up. He forces the plot with no explanation and his cliches are done horribly. Grammar is horrible, and the reason i didn't give it 1 star is cause at least i could read it. i dont recommend to people who are trying to get invested in a fanfic. If you want to waste your time like i did, who was willing to give this fic a chance, then sure, try it out.
Reborn into Hyuga
lonhet
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I do not know if you read poorly or read the first few chapters. The only claim I can agree with is the translation. (I warned about this) The text says in a direct tone: The main character is a geneticist scientist. He was born 1 year before Madara. His mother died in chapter 2. The so-called servant is his own uncle, and the elder who takes birth is his father. I'm not sure about the cliche.
the novel some light romance , he seems kinda weird , also the jab with his father not being able to save the mothers of neeborn is kinda weird .
lonhet:I do not know if you read poorly or read the first few chapters. The only claim I can agree with is the translation. (I warned about this) The text says in a direct tone: The main character is a geneticist scientist. He was born 1 year before Madara. His mother died in chapter 2. The so-called servant is his own uncle, and the elder who takes birth is his father. I'm not sure about the cliche.
lonhet:I do not know if you read poorly or read the first few chapters. The only claim I can agree with is the translation. (I warned about this) The text says in a direct tone: The main character is a geneticist scientist. He was born 1 year before Madara. His mother died in chapter 2. The so-called servant is his own uncle, and the elder who takes birth is his father. I'm not sure about the cliche.
OPINIÓN sin bases, lee los 84 capitulos y verás que es buena, el autor hizo algo nuevo, no lo mismo de siempre que reenarnan en la aldea de konoha y se hacen todo poderosos rapidísimo.
lonhet:I do not know if you read poorly or read the first few chapters. The only claim I can agree with is the translation. (I warned about this) The text says in a direct tone: The main character is a geneticist scientist. He was born 1 year before Madara. His mother died in chapter 2. The so-called servant is his own uncle, and the elder who takes birth is his father. I'm not sure about the cliche.
a comment made to purposely disparage the novel. when you look at your profile and see the novels you've read... worse than this comment, you should write more than 1000 novels in wenovel. another person who unfairly underrated your novel. you're reading more garbage novels than this. this novel is good It's a novel, but you didn't read it with your eyes.
Autor, planea hacer de la novela de hyuga una de viajero a otros universos, porque suendo sincero todas las novelas basadas en anime de fanfic tocan un techo y no se puede avanzar la historia sin que se rompa, y naruto no es un universo grande y sus niveles de poderes y posibilidades no son comparables con otros, pero creo que usted esta poniendo como base el mundo de naruto para viajar a otros universos mas adelante, lo sospechoso por la extraña habilidad que le dio el padre de samato
lonhet:I do not know if you read poorly or read the first few chapters. The only claim I can agree with is the translation. (I warned about this) The text says in a direct tone: The main character is a geneticist scientist. He was born 1 year before Madara. His mother died in chapter 2. The so-called servant is his own uncle, and the elder who takes birth is his father. I'm not sure about the cliche.