The first thing I thought when I read your synopsis is that it could be written better. Some lines were a bit awkward to read so I suggest you give it a revise! Second, this story seems oddly similar to BnHA. Was it your inspiration? I think your story has a lot of potential as long as you keep doing your best. Please keep up the good work!
Denzel_Silver
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LIKEDenzel_Silver:Thank you for your honest feedback. Please don't forget to vote with Power Stones. Also, as my first top contributor, I have a character for you. I hope you watch her grow. Would you like you character to be a cadet or a professor ?
ThreyaMidnight:I would love to be a cadet! Thank you for the character <3 Please don't kill her immediatelyimage
ThreyaMidnight:if she dies, give her a death worthy of a hero, please! thank you 😭😭😭