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ThreyaMidnight
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The first thing I thought when I read your synopsis is that it could be written better. Some lines were a bit awkward to read so I suggest you give it a revise! Second, this story seems oddly similar to BnHA. Was it your inspiration? I think your story has a lot of potential as long as you keep doing your best. Please keep up the good work!

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Unlimited: Universal Threat Level

Denzel_Silver

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Denzel_Silver
Denzel_SilverAuthorDenzel_Silver

Thank you for your honest feedback. Please don't forget to vote with Power Stones. Also, as my first top contributor, I have a character for you. I hope you watch her grow. Would you like you character to be a cadet or a professor ?

ThreyaMidnight
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I would love to be a cadet! Thank you for the character <3 Please don't kill her immediately

Denzel_Silver:Thank you for your honest feedback. Please don't forget to vote with Power Stones. Also, as my first top contributor, I have a character for you. I hope you watch her grow. Would you like you character to be a cadet or a professor ?
Denzel_Silver
Denzel_SilverAuthorDenzel_Silver

I'll try...hehe.She'll introduced in the next chapter

ThreyaMidnight:I would love to be a cadet! Thank you for the character <3 Please don't kill her immediately
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ThreyaMidnight
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if she dies, give her a death worthy of a hero, please! thank you 😭😭😭

Denzel_Silver:I'll try...hehe.She'll introduced in the next chapter
Denzel_Silver
Denzel_SilverAuthorDenzel_Silver

😂😂😂øk ma'am

ThreyaMidnight:if she dies, give her a death worthy of a hero, please! thank you 😭😭😭