This fic is brimming with potential, most Overlord fics (and heck the original itself) suffer from a major problem of balancing. Most of the time there is simply no way to write a compelling story if the protagonist can nuke any threat, this is especially exacerbated in fanfics where writers OCs either replace momonga and 9/10 are infinetly stronger than he is or come alongside him and are unbeatable together. The '''''solution''''' for this problem is either filling the novel with smut, which is fine if that's all they're going for, fill it with mindless filler or make it More administrative which can be extremely dull. This fic will not have the aforementioned problems as eve has been set up (at least as far as I can tell) in OPPOSITION to Momonga; this will mean not only can this fic have wars and fights with actual stakes bit also can allow for some great politicking (is the emperor trying to play off Eve and Momonga against eacother), The writing is great, concise (thank lord its concise Mr origin 38 chapters and still not on Yggdrasil) the aesthetic of androids is chefs kiss as always. So I'm very excited to see this fic develop.
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