Sorry about this but this is my opinion on the story so far. I haven’t read very far into it, I admit, but I already don’t recommend this story. It is too fast paced, the grammar isn’t the best, and the mc is arrogant, but I guess that’s more for comedic effect. Hopefully there is some character development in the future. Besides that, another Sakura fic I’d recommend would be Jade. It’s about Sakura going back in time and fixing things and it’s all-in-all a really good wattpad fic. Again, I apologize and this is my first and most honest(not saying my reviews aren’t honest) bad review of a fic but i’m sure it gets better, right? I’ll try reading it again in the future to see, but, for now, goodbye author.
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LIKEI see, thank you for the info. I’ll definitely try it again once it gets more chapters, preferably 100, but we’ll see if it gets there.
Leon_Luis_:it actually got better after 15 chapters, pacing got better after chunin arc .. well before that arc its all boring overused stuff anyway afterall most fic drop around chunin arc.
yeah great idea .. but i think it will not last that long.. cause shipuden is right around the corner and its only been like 37 chapters(- announcements , notices and stats chapter )
CyberBlancaX:I see, thank you for the info. I’ll definitely try it again once it gets more chapters, preferably 100, but we’ll see if it gets there.
Leon_Luis_:yeah great idea .. but i think it will not last that long.. cause shipuden is right around the corner and its only been like 37 chapters(- announcements , notices and stats chapter )