All I have to say is wow. Quite detailed, and... also explicit 👀. The writing quality is very good, and the story developed a bit faster than I could expect. So that's a good thing. Still quite early, so I can't say anything about character design and world background. So for that I give you a healthy 4, since your standards seem quite high. 🙌🙌🙌
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