Review Detail of D_Wolf in Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives

Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities. So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.