Review Detail of Onunkwo_Precious in Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives

if possible, make the mc have a steadier or calm character. you can also make it the character to be funnier. the character the mc displays is a little worrying, you can't allow him to be courting death all the time right? he is to egoistic, arrogant.... This is just my advice, I also hope your novel gets picked