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Translation and updating stability are a 5 everything else is a 3. Right off the bat let’s start with the MC, the MC isnt stupid or dull by any stretch of the imagination. Fairly smart tbh in how he acts. The only issue is that his character as well as everyone else in this novel needs to be fleshed out just a little more. World background is okay. It’s easy to understand but not amazing in any aspect. All around a decent book to pass the time with and has the chance to be a diamond in the rough provided the author works hard to improve.

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Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives

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After reading further I Find it odd that the Author seems to try to portray the MC as someone who is kind and magnanimous but comes off as a greedy weasel. Which is fine if its written that way but it’s not….