Amazing, Its great that you decided to try and rewrite the story. It appears to have lots of potential and will be a huge a success if you keep working hard. Great Book
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LIKEI mean like its general storyline. What's the MC's major goal or whatever? Cause the description did not really reveal anything. Just an old guy saying the British magical government is arrogant.
LiquidCallous:if this is a serious question then harry potter.
the general gist is imperial china is expanding and in a militaristic way meaning every place it's expanding into doesn't like that, eventually the mc will have to choose between Chinese (huangdi) heritage and non chinese heratige(Caesarean). that's all I'm givin up want more then read.
BreezyNovels:I mean like its general storyline. What's the MC's major goal or whatever? Cause the description did not really reveal anything. Just an old guy saying the British magical government is arrogant.