Review Detail of nvanattia in MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

The novel is a fairly decent read. The quality of the writing is kind of what holds me back from enjoying it. There are 2 words that the author apparently interchange improperly. The first being petty. The MC returns and is a very petty person, but the author keeps calling him pity instead. The same usage goes for other parts of the story like describing how groups of people are fighting over "pity" things...The second one is invisible. For some reason the author likes to use invincible in place of invisible. One of the most common tines you see this is when someone gives themselves an "invincible" pat on the back for doing something. Add in very atrocious gender swaps when referring to he/she and her/him in passages and it can be quite difficult to read.It is kind of sad, because it could be a very enjoyable book if it was cleared up.Also, the FP charges will got to 2 per chapter at times which is a deal breaker for me. I know that it isn't necessarily the author's fault, but paying more for already overpriced chapters is not something I will do.Good luck to those who continue to read it though.