Review Detail of Nullsubstance in MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

Like the path the story is taking and the style is one of my favorite. If I have to give a suggestion is to reduce a little bit the morons side of the story. This is the kind of young master owns the world and gets slap in the face, but this kind of characters should get a bit less story time to improve the pacing. Also I feel a bit sad when we get 1 character that is so bad that ruins a good story, sometimes is the MC, other times is antagonist, in this one it’s is friend Leonel. The dude have a 5years old brain and no common sence and MC instead of educate him his supporting his decisions. please upgrade him to at least a 12 years brain so he can tell right from wrong!