Tried to follow till ch 20. I wish I can continue it further more. As a gun guy, i won't tell much about guns since its "fantasy" But my biggest problem lies at the cover. Seriously tho? E-sized girl's cover? and the story is counterproductive with the cover. like ???? Fix it, consider rewriting your book from scratch.
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